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Poetry

Postby slave on Mon Apr 24, 2006 7:55 am

hey guys what you think about poetry
i wanna introduce this thread on forums index page but i cant do that so i starting from here
come on share some poetry with each other
cheer up
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hi there

Postby slave on Mon Apr 24, 2006 7:57 am

I will love you with all my heart,
To have forever - never to part.
This is a promise engrained in me,
Take my hand and let it be.
I will go to the ends of the earth if that is what you need,
Just say yes and let your soul take the lead.
This is a promise at the core of me,
Kiss my lips and let this be.
I will wipe your tears with no questions asked,
No more will your feelings be masked.
This is a promise I make to you,
Look into my eyes and follow through.
I will know how to hold you just by the look in your eye,
I will never forget - not even on the day that I die.
This is a promise of my passion for you,
smile at me and make it true.
I will support you even when I cannot support myself anymore,
I will dig deeper and find the hidden strength at my inner core.
This promise means I sacrifice all of me for you,
Understand this- and make our lives anew.
I will love you with everything so deep inside,
And to only you - this gift I shall confide.
This is a promise so incredibly real,
kiss me my love and you shall feel.
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My poetry

Postby davix on Tue Apr 25, 2006 2:52 pm

Is my blog.
Long live and prosper.
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Re: hi there

Postby pcweirdo on Wed Apr 26, 2006 12:16 pm

slave wrote:a sweet poem.
I love you too, mainly because of the poem.

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Postby alkaios on Sun Apr 30, 2006 2:23 pm

Very nice topic.I will share my favourite one poetry lyric.It's a song lyric actually which I am mad about it Cool

"I keep looking for something I can't get
Broken hearts lie all around me
And I don't see an easy way out of this
Her diary, it sits on the bedside table
The curtains are closed, the cat's in the cradle
Who would've thought that a boy like me could come to this.
Oh, I just died in your arms tonight
It must've been something you said,
I just died in your arms tonight
Oh, I just died in your arms tonight
It must've been some kind of kiss
I should've walked away, I should've walked away.
Is there any just cause for feeling like this
On the surface I'm a name on a list
I try to be discreet, but then blow it again
I've lost and found, it's my final mistake
She's loving by proxy, no give and all take
'Cause I've been thrilled to fantasy one too many times."

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hi there

Postby slave on Tue May 02, 2006 7:52 am

Dear LOVE......!!

I belive in RIGHT

because without it

there is an absence of GOD

I belive in GOD

because without it

there is an absence of LOVE

I belive in LOVE

because without it

there is an absence of YOU

i belive in YOU

because without YOU

there is an absencs of ME.................!!!!!
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Postby Galjak on Tue May 02, 2006 11:56 am

Jacques Prevert:


Our Father who art in heaven
Stay there
And we'll stay here on earth
Which is sometimes so lovely
With its mysteries of New York
And its mysteries of Paris
At least as good as that of the Trinity
With its little canal at Ourcq
Its great wall of China
Its river at Morlaix
Its candy canes
With its Pacific Ocean
And its two basins in the Tuileries
With its good children and bad people
With all the wonders of the world
Which are here
Simply on the earth
Offered to everyone
Strewn about
Wondering at the wonder of themselves
And daring not avow it
As a naked pretty girl dares not show herself
With the world's outrageous misfortunes
Which are legion
With legionaries
With torturers
With the masters of this world
The masters with their priests their traitors and their troops
With the seasons
With the years
With the pretty girls and with the old bastards
With the straw of misery rotting in the steel
of cannons.
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hi there come on guyz share some poetry :P

Postby slave on Sat May 06, 2006 7:30 am

Don't know how to explain it
Can't really put it into words
You've touched my life in so many ways
You never cease to amaze me.

I don't know what the future holds
I can't pretend that I do
I just know beyond a doubt
I always want you around.

Whether we stay the closest of friends
Or I become the love of your life
Or maybe even both occurs
As long as your in my life I can smile.

Something about you makes me smile
Not just with my mouth
And not just with my eyes
But all the way to my soul.

Thank you for what you are to me
For being who you are
And adding happiness to this life
And giving me a reason to smile.
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Postby jimie on Sat May 06, 2006 10:13 am

here is old song of Michael Jackson that i like verry much:

What about sunrise
What about rain
What about all the things
That you said we were to gain...
What about killing fields
Is there a time
What about all the things
That you said was yours and mine...
Did you ever stop to notice
All the blood we've shed before
Did you ever stop to notice
The crying Earth the weeping shores?
Aaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaaaaah
What have we done to the world
Look what we've done
What about all the peace
That you pledge your only son...
What about flowering fields
Is there a time
What about all the dreams
That you said was yours and mine...
Did you ever stop to notice
All the children dead from war
Did you ever stop to notice
The crying Earth the weeping shores
Aaaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaaaaaah
I used to dream
I used to glance beyond the stars
Now I don't know where we are
Although I know we've drifted far
Aaaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaaaaaaah
Aaaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaaaaaaah
Hey, what about yesterday
(What about us)
What about the seas
(What about us)
The heavens are falling down
(What about us)
I can't even breathe
(What about us)
What about the bleeding Earth
(What about us)
Can't we feel its wounds
(What about us)
What about nature's worth
(ooo,ooo)
It's our planet's womb
(What about us)
What about animals
(What about it)
We've turned kingdoms to dust
(What about us)
What about elephants
(What about us)
Have we lost their trust
(What about us)
What about crying whales
(What about us)
We're ravaging the seas
(What about us)
What about forest trails
(ooo, ooo)
Burnt despite our pleas
(What about us)
What about the holy land
(What about it)
Torn apart by creed
(What about us)
What about the common man
(What about us)
Can't we set him free
(What about us)
What about children dying
(What about us)
Can't you hear them cry
(What about us)
Where did we go wrong
(ooo, ooo)
Someone tell me why
(What about us)
What about babies
(What about it)
What about the days
(What about us)
What about all their joy
(What about us)
What about the man
(What about us)
What about the crying man
(What about us)
What about Abraham
(What was us)
What about death again
(ooo, ooo)
Do we gïve a damn
Aaaaaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaaaaaaaah
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Postby azwethinkweiz on Mon May 08, 2006 2:45 am

This could get good, maybe we could get this stickied, admins?
Here is my inspired poem that finally isn't about love! (inspired by picture below)

Sea of Life -- Azwethinkweiz

. I am as the blind--sight drawn from my eye,
As light of morning fell way to Eve,
To the temptations that serpents can weave,
Apocalypse of mortal sea and eternal sky.
. I am as the deaf--sound nulled from my ear,
From silent roars of the beasts so close behind,
Pray for salvation from monsters in mind,
His cryptic replies are my greatest fear.
. I am as the palsy--nerve ripped from my hand,
Failing to care for what I am Abel,
Left helpless and lone to wear this label,
Brutus, my brother, was this your command?
. A curse I have left to reek from the sea,
Its bitter cup left waiting for me.

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hi there

Postby slave on Mon May 08, 2006 7:03 am

Don't know how to explain it
Can't really put it into words
You've touched my life in so many ways
You never cease to amaze me.

I don't know what the future holds
I can't pretend that I do
I just know beyond a doubt
I always want you around.

Whether we stay the closest of friends
Or I become the love of your life
Or maybe even both occurs
As long as your in my life I can smile.

Something about you makes me smile
Not just with my mouth
And not just with my eyes
But all the way to my soul.

Thank you for what you are to me
For being who you are
And adding happiness to this life
And giving me a reason to smile.
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hi there

Postby slave on Thu May 11, 2006 6:07 am

You may not know how much I care for you,
Yet we are the best of friends.
We haven't known each other very long,
Mainly only in band.
When I got into a fight
With your best friend,
You listened to my problems
And to all that I said.
You did not understand why I fell in love with him,
Or why we were no longer friends;
Yet you went through it all,
Good and bad
Then we got into a fight
And it nearly broke my heart.
I cried all night,
And could not believe that we did part.
Then we got into a fight
And it nearly broke my heart.
I cried all night,
And could not believe that we did part.
You said you realized what you had done;
With him not speaking to me,
Just like her not speaking to you,
We are on the same level, me and you.
He is still stubborn
haan haan i know i know Aniyaa
And she bull-headed.
They don't know that forgiveness and understanding
Is the best anyone can give
Now that we talk again
We've learned so much about each other,
That we would rather die
Than be without each other.
Now you know how much I care
And how much you mean to me.
I hope we never fight again,
Or for at least a long time, anyway.
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